MaX Sprite Training

here it is....


the reference is my avi (edit) the avi change,here's the reference:
and is i'm already make the shading?

please comment...

update:
fixed sprite

and with bulbasur

update 2:
i try making other sprite, and i use character which i create myself
here:
name, Takahashi Ryosuke
Left, Tenku Ryuu Mode (Sky dragon Mode, Advanced Stage)
Right, Normal stance

yeah i know i'm still not good in spriting...comment?
update 3:
i make it after i woke up Kaiba Seto (YuGiOh!)
and reference
yeah with his slogan hahaha, comment?

update 4: Charmander , do it in 50 minutes
the reference:
normal one and when he's using ember

and standing stance:

Okay well. Here's a full overview.

-face/head: The shape is wrong. try adding more detail to the outline (like bumps for eyebrows and a sharper chin. Hat seems a bit flat compared to yor avi and doesn't have white lines liek avi. Also your avi's hair is a brown not black.

-uper torso: Well when you're doing something liek this...where a lot of clothes are touching other clothes try outlining the clothes ontop of other ones with a colored outline. And Try not to use so many straight lines while spriting. Also the bag sems a bit weird. The strap si too square-ish

-Lower toirso: very good! ^.^ Just teh red pixels on the shoe can be executed a bit better.


Overall good sprite...even better for your first! Keep practicing and keep up teh good work! ^-^

thx for the comment Bubble.
How about the NTSD?it is working?

Well I got it downloaded and then when I tried playing it...it froze and then shutdown. T.T

update:fix some....


lol i even download from the same link but i can play it no problem

Much better! Good job!

hei how do you enlarge the size of the picture when using paint? when i done it and the sprite r ruined
fortunately i got the replacement

and i got little problem with drawing the eyes

Well to resize...try resising by hundreds...Like 300 or 500 on paint. Go to image on top then resize/skew then write the above (300 or 500 or whatever) in bother horizontal and vertical. This is really the ponly way I know how on paint without getting rid of sprite quality...So I recommend using gimp to resize things.

And for faces...i'll make a tutorial really quick this morning, hope you can wait?

Well I was trying to fix your sprite, but I got carried away and made my own XD
http://noob-sama18.deviantart.com/art/Red-Sprite-175416365

yeah very nice darkangel!!!
although his hair looks like grey colour(make him look old)

hei cheack my new sprite (not good enough yet but improving)on first post

lol forgot to do the shading

edit:

is the shading okay?

Well, to be honest I liked your first sprite better. TThis one kinda has wil outlines.

Head/Face:Hmm, well it's okay. You got the shape better then your first try at spriting. But still, its a bit too large. Try not doubling up the black lines for the hair as much, and you could leave some parts of the hair without outlines, to give it a more realistic feature.

Upper Torso: It's a little too skinny. Try making the body more of a straight line raqther then go in as much as it does. Ir keep it hot it is, just fix up the arms. The arm on our left seems too long and the foearm is to straight. Once again try not to use as many straight lines when working with most sprites.

Lower torso: Is okay, the shoes are too big though.

All problems easily fixed...so keep up the work!

hmm gotta try make other sprite with your suggestion, Bubble well i'll keep that for tomorrow it already near midnight here

i make him while wathcing Smallville (he's not from Smallville though)
yeah he's a lot of messy...

Kay kay, slounds good!

here's another,

his name is Kaiba Seto from YuGiOh!
comment anyone?

I like it *thumbs
but fix legs a bit and shading there could be hust little curved line

ok hayley i'll try it

update: here's the fixed one,or not?

and included the reference in the first post

It's pretty good To be hones,t your best so far. keep up the good work! You're improving a lots.

thx Bubble,
and i still don't understand how the Sprite Academy works

Yeah well it's not open yet. Once it's open we'll post blogs explaing everything. But last night the forum I'ma mod at got a bit crazy as so i didn't have time to wrokl on the group.

ok then good luck with your work as mod

can i edit it?
i'll try to show u how to shade it

ok i'll learn something from u thx